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Not to my liking.

I really didn't like this track at all. It's really un original and the lyrics in it were really not so good. The title wasn't very amusing at all and it really made me think the track was bad even before i played it. I think you should improve on your lyrics and make a tune a lot more hearable. The lead break was really bad, it just sounded like a guy just randomly plucking any note on the neck. I think you should spend a lot more time working on your music.

Quickbeam responds:

I spent actually spent a week on this song. And no wonder you didn't like it, you like shitty Indie music. No match for some fucking hardcore Death Metal. If you don't like this Genre of music, then don't bother fucking reviewing it.

Sweet.

When i first heard the tune, i didn't expect it to go into the beat it did. I like it when songs do that and yours is no exception. I think the piano and synths in the middle need to have the levels changed around a bit because it's quite bassy and you kind of lose the note for a second or two. But i do really like this song and i must say you've done an excellent job on it. Well done!

Jiao-Zhang responds:

Heh, Thanks alot. Well, this is the first time I tried this style. =D Thanks for the tips, I'll see what I can do later.

~Yogosun

Brilliant!

This is brilliant. There's not one thing wrong with it. The heavy drumming in it was awesome and the voices are really strange but totally suit it. This is brilliant man. Keep it up!

Fheng-Shui responds:

THX man!!

Nice clean track.

This is a very nice clean sounding track, very good drumming and very in time too. I liked the tune, very original and the lead break in the middle was brilliant. I think you should put some lyrics in it though to make it a lot better. But even without, still very good. I was thinking that the bass needs to be turned up and the treble down a touch and the volume up. But then it wouldn't sound that punky. The genre isn't a favourite of mine but this is definately one of my favourite tunes in the genre ;)

RyanPridgeon responds:

Thanks, I made sure I didn't go wrong with the drums on this one ^-^
And yeah, trust me, you would NOT like my singing xD i have such an annoying voice but anyway thanks for the suggestions and the review :D

Alright..

I don't really see much originality in this track at all, the robot sound is very old and in your song it didn't really sound that good anyway.
The drum beats kept jumping out of time in parts of the song which really meant that you couldn't actually get a beat going in your head along with it. You should try and make them in time or just make a loop throughout the whole song.

newskies responds:

Ohhh. Yeah. The beat jumps out of time. You know, I had not noticed that before I submitted it to Newgrounds. Oh well.
But thanks anyway for your review and... I think... 6 isn't that bad so thx!

-NewSkies

Mixed feel to it.

This song has an evil or sad sound to it but then later comes in with a more lively up-beat sort of tune. I don't think that really fits in a song.
Also, i noticed that the tune kept changing into a new tune but keeping the old beats behind it which kind of god a bit overwhelming. Don't get me wrong, i did like it i just think you should work a bit more on it :)

Good Job!

DJ-DaVinster responds:

Thanks for the Review!

I'll try and take you advice for the FULL version. Can you PM me some more tips if you have the time?

Thanks,
-DJ DaVinster

Good

It was a good tune and i liked the beat, although i'm not sure it was techno. This sounds more like a slightly faster Ambient song. Anyway, the instruments and effects you used were decent and it had a good all round feel to it. I do like it, i'm sorry i've placed it low it's just i kind of reserve the top 3 for songs i'm amazed by.

CjienX responds:

cool, thanksfor the review

Alright

It was alright. The tune wasn't very original, but then, because of the sheer amount of songs produced ever.. not many are.. :P Anyway, it was a good beat and it was quite clear. It sounded like techno rock, almost like Nine Inch Nails, except not so depressing and sinister sounding.

Well done!

suppi responds:

heh thanks i guess

Needs improvement.

All in all it's an alright song but i think the sound levels are a bit off, the main tune needs to be a bit quieter and less trebly, you need to add a bit more bass in there somewhere.

Good tune all in all but like i said, needs a bit more adjusting. That's all i think is the downsides :)

CyrusOfNaias responds:

I was thinking I needed more bass...
Thanks!

Decent sound.

Very nice, i liked the soft sounds of the instruments. Almost sounded like a wind type instrument. Although, later on in the song when the hi-hat gets really loud, i don't think that's good at all, it gets a little bit annoying.
The volume also seems to get louder and quieter throughout different parts of the song which is strange.
Anyway, i do like this quite a lot so i think a 9 is a good rating for this :).

Quarl responds:

Yeah, I noticed those things too. :(

I'll fix them eventually, but unnfortunatly the remaster won't be posted here.

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