Brilliant!
I love the guitar sound in this. The banging of a deep drum really fitted it too. The guitars were really clear and the tune was pretty damn good. The ambience effect at the end of the song was good too. I think you should make songs that have a clear finish to them though, as a lot of your songs kind of end suddenly and leave you feeling a little empty inside. Well, maybe not that bad but you catch my drift.. Well done :)
Pretty good!
This is a very decent track. I like the build up of the tune behind the drums. The tune was pretty clear on this and i liked it. The different sound effects were good too. Also, i think the drums really fit this peice and you've added just the right amount of bass drum in it.
Well done!
Good but needs improvement
There wasn't a clear tune in this peice which i think it really needed. The timing was really well in it, the effects you put on the lyrics were really good too. The acoustic guitar was alright at the end though. I don't think your voice fits well in this peice unfortunately but it's alright.
Nice track.
This song is actually quite good. The drums are really well played in it and i see talent here. At the beginning i thought it was going to be one constant note but then when the change came it was really good. I liked the lead break too, i like how you have two guitars playing at the same time or however you chose to do it. Really clean sounding too, really well equalized. I think you should get someone to sing some lyrics for this but i think they should be singing and then shouting in the chorus, that would make it a lot better.
Well done!
Not to my liking.
I really didn't like this track at all. It's really un original and the lyrics in it were really not so good. The title wasn't very amusing at all and it really made me think the track was bad even before i played it. I think you should improve on your lyrics and make a tune a lot more hearable. The lead break was really bad, it just sounded like a guy just randomly plucking any note on the neck. I think you should spend a lot more time working on your music.
I spent actually spent a week on this song. And no wonder you didn't like it, you like shitty Indie music. No match for some fucking hardcore Death Metal. If you don't like this Genre of music, then don't bother fucking reviewing it.
Sweet.
When i first heard the tune, i didn't expect it to go into the beat it did. I like it when songs do that and yours is no exception. I think the piano and synths in the middle need to have the levels changed around a bit because it's quite bassy and you kind of lose the note for a second or two. But i do really like this song and i must say you've done an excellent job on it. Well done!
Heh, Thanks alot. Well, this is the first time I tried this style. =D Thanks for the tips, I'll see what I can do later.
~Yogosun
Brilliant!
This is brilliant. There's not one thing wrong with it. The heavy drumming in it was awesome and the voices are really strange but totally suit it. This is brilliant man. Keep it up!
THX man!!
Nice.
The snare drum sounded very fake and didn't really suit the song. The hi-hat also was a short sound and made it sound quite bad. But i do like the bass drumming in your songs, very nice. The tune wasn't great but i did like it, you should try and come up with a long chord structure with a good sound to make your future songs better. Also, a lot of songs on Newgrounds have no lyrics to them and i think that doesn't make it that good so i think you should add lyrics.
Average.
Not a brilliant track but not bad either. The chord structure wasn't very original at all and i feel like you didn't really try to come up with an original tune. But still, even with an old tune, you made it sound good. I think it needs a lead break in there somewhere, with some high treble and a decent tune. All in all it's an alright track. Well done!
Nice clean track.
This is a very nice clean sounding track, very good drumming and very in time too. I liked the tune, very original and the lead break in the middle was brilliant. I think you should put some lyrics in it though to make it a lot better. But even without, still very good. I was thinking that the bass needs to be turned up and the treble down a touch and the volume up. But then it wouldn't sound that punky. The genre isn't a favourite of mine but this is definately one of my favourite tunes in the genre ;)
Thanks, I made sure I didn't go wrong with the drums on this one ^-^
And yeah, trust me, you would NOT like my singing xD i have such an annoying voice but anyway thanks for the suggestions and the review :D
S
Age 31, Male
The Pope
Cheshire, UK
Joined on 6/2/06
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